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PartStory BeatScene #Action in scene
1Opening Image1First sentence: The gorgeous topless woman on the cover of the tabloid was my mother kissing a man, but that guy wasn’t my father. My father claimed page 10 for his own five seconds of glory in the Shownews magazine.
1Theme stated2The theme: I don’t need anyone, I’m depending on no one. Somewhere in Ellen and Patricks divorce Ellen says to Patrick: You can’t do it all by yourself, you have to trust someone.
1Setup3,4,5In the setup some elements have to be addressed:
. Ryker is unwanted child not compatible with mum and dad careers
. Ryker is raised by nannies. After last one left pregnant with dad’s child older couple took on nanny job (Ryker 10 – 16 years?)
. Ryker learned construction worker skills from man of older couple
. Big family argument about Rykers career choice. Dad disappointed, Mom worried about image
. Marlijne Berents is his English teacher and gives him tutoring lessons at her house
. Ryker is struggling with his secret BDSM-thoughts and feelings
1Catalyst6-11. Scene about a girl in school and how Ryker freaks out
. Ryker is doing construction work in Marlijne’s house.
. Patrick becomes Secretary of Commerce in the Dutch government
. Ryker gets drivers licence
. Moms daily tv show “Ellen talk” is hugely popular on Dutch TV
. Patrick Vermeer gets heart attack and dies
. Funeral and Rykers feelings
. House gets sold. Mom buys house near Hilversum (close to TV studio)
. Ryker starts own company and finishes school
. Marlijne stops working at 62 year and 11 months old
. Catalyst: Article in Shownews about Rykers BDSM-books (Picture by real estate agent of Bookcase in Rykers bedroom without his consent or knowledge)
. Mom is worried about her own career
1Debate12-14Ryker moves in with Marlijne.
. Shock in community about teacher (former teacher with bad boy)
. Marlijne talk with Ryker about hidden feelings. She shows him part of her diary that shows her insecurities about her submissive feelings.
. Talk leads to how Ryker sees his future.
. Marlijne offers Ryker a bet. She will train him to be a confident master and that will result in him marrying a submissive wife within a year. If she doesn’t succeed she offers her submission instead?
2Break into 215-17To be a good master you have to know how it feels to be submissive
. Month of hell
. Revenge week
. Negotiations (getting to know eachother)
2B-story18What’s in it for Marlijne?
2Fun and Games19-25In this part Ryker thinks he has mastered the art of being a master. He feels good about this. We see him training Marlijne.
2Midpoint26Enter Ulla and Ilse Stölzer. Owner of a BDSM-club in Germany
2Bad guys moving in27-33Ryker falls hard for Ulla.
. Ulla is hardcore masochist. Are her wants and needs compatible with Rykers Daddy Dom dominance?
. Ulla is the slut of the BDSM club. Can Ryker accept this without jealousy?
. Ilse is encouraged by Ryker to explore her limits and her submission
2All is lost34Marlijne dies. Ulla breaks up with him, for being too soft for her
2Dark Night of the Soul35-37What has happened, and why is his life in shambles?
. What is Marlijne heritage (apart from leaving her everything to him in her will) in his personal growth
. Can he live without her, and how?
. Can he win Ulla back, and how?
3Break into three38Can he do everything himself without help, or could he ask Ilse for help? Ilse tells him to ‘man up’ and show Ulla what he is capable of.
3Finale – Gathering the team39The plan: Ryker makes picture of Ilse tied in the back of the van. Bald head, gold coloured rings through the nipples and labia and tied securely. I’ve taken your mom to Holland. I you like to join us, you’re welcome
3Finale – Executing the Plan39To the tattoo shop. Shaving. Mine. Marriage? Drive back to Holland with Ilse tied in the back of the Transit. The leave the note and pics for Ulla.
3Finale – The High Tower Surprise40Two days go by. Nothing happens. Until two powerhouse guys kick the door in of the Rykers house and beat him up. They are only stopped by Ilse that claims she went voluntarily with Ryker.
3Finale – Dig Deep Down40Ryker nevertheless ends up in ER of the Hospital. They do checks, but nothing is broken or permanently damaged. Ulla claims to have feelings for Ryker.
3Finale – Execution of New Plan41Ryker goes home and tells Ulla he is going to marry Ilse. If Ulla wants to stay she will be at the bottom of the hierarchy in his household and will answer to her mother. She will be shaven bald as well and pierced and tattooed. She agrees.
3Final image42,43The last scenes is the cover of Shownews that has an full page article of the SM-marriage of Ryker with ‘the owner of a SM-club in Germany.”
Details about the marriage ceremony of Ryker, Ilse and Ulla.
In the last chapter is a recap how their new life is going on a regular daily basis.

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