Outline Ugly Girl

Finished outline Ugly Girl in June 2025

The book is written in the first person, like Bad Girl and Good Girl. This time, the narrator’s voice is Zuzanna. She is the best friend of Sylvia for as long as both can remember. See the references in the two books before Ugly Girl. The time period of the book is between 7 February 2028 and somewhere in January 2030. I am still not sure what is the correct way of dividing them into chapters.

Part 1

Koen de Groen, the main character in the first two books, finds out he has cancer and dies after a short illness. His estate is divided between his two sons, his two wives get nothing. In a letter, Koen gives his second wife to his son and his first wife to her best friend. Jutta, his second wife, seems to cope best with this. For Sylvia, the loss is too great and she sinks into a deep depression. Ultimately, this ends with Sylvia attempting suicide.
Zuzanna feels guilty and helpless for not being able to prevent this, and decides to do everything in her power to prevent Sylvia from taking her own life. They are almost too late. In the mental institution, Sylvia has made another attempt, unsuccessful as well. She is now in isolation and Sandor, her son, and Zuzanna insist on taking her home with them, against the doctor’s advice.
With Sandor and his wife Ilse, her mother Jutta Sylvia and Zuzanna visit Master Ricardo. He has made armcuffs that cannot come off with a chain between them that can pull a truck and will not break. After they leave, Zuzanna is linked to Sylvia, so Sylvia is always in her eyesight and cannot run away from Zuzanna to ‘do foolish things.’
What does it mean to be chained to another person, like Siamese twins? What problems they face?

Part 2

Donald J. Watson attends the funeral of Koen de Groen together with his friend Martin. In previous books, hints were made that Martin’s wife (Helga) might be sold to the highest bidder once he got bored with her. As Donald J. had problems with the behaviour of his wife, both men decide to swap wives. Donald J. will get Helga and Victoria Holmes, Donald’s wife, will go to Martin for her ‘re-education’ period.
Donald J.’s son, Ciaran, is being kicked out of his private school in Edinburgh. His second expulsion in two years in two different schools. Donald J. blames Victoria to have spoiled his son rotten. Both son and father are gamblers and they make a bet: If he lives on his own and manage to complete his two years school-and-work program, his father will not interfere with his future and he is free to follow whatever ambition he may have. If he fucks up, then he will enlist as a soldier in the army. Ciaran hates the army.
Only problem is: With his mother in Germany with Martin and Donald J. with his prime-submissive new partner Victoria, he doesn’t want his son around. The swap is meant to be reversed in two years’ time, and Donald J. is keen to make the most out of that period. Ciaran will ignore a hired hand, like he ignored his teachers. When Donald J. learns that Sylvia and Zuzanna were both teachers, he bribes a judge in England to give both of the 65- and 66-year-old women full parental rights.
Zuzanna and Donald J. meet for the first time and totally get off at the wrong foot and Zuzanna flat out refuses to help him. After mediation by Sandor, Koen and Sylvia’s son, they finally agree to meet with him.

Part 3

Zuzanna and Sylvia agree for different reasons to go to Scotland and take care of Ciaran for two years.
In the middle of the Scottish rural area is Killiecrankie, a small town above Pitlochry. Donald J. owns a small house there as an investment opportunity and offers the women the house as a gift. In the middle of nowhere, Ciaran cannot be trouble, and he is far away from London, so he cannot disturb his daddy.
The house is big enough for two, but too small for three, but Sylvia and Zuzanna are optimistic.
When Ciaran comes to the home in Killiecrankie for the first time, two things happen: Ciaran is very disappointed with his two ‘old’ companions, and Zuzanna – the self acclaimed ugly one – falls in love with Ciaran at first sight. Despite 50 years age difference. Smitten. Over the moon. Totally, madly, in love.

Part 4

Ciaran hangs out with his friends and only comes ‘home’ to sleep and eat. He doesn’t want to go to school anymore. He wants to earn money to do whatever he wants.
He finds a job with a car dealer as an apprentice. He learns the skills of a mechanic working on big trucks. Cool.
His first paycheck he celebrates by going to the pub and some of his friends bring him home drunk and almost broke.
Zuzanna who has lived frugally in the past – out of necessity, not out of want – manages to get by that month with some clever solutions.
Ciaran feels guilty that his housekeepers don’t have anything to eat either and yet don’t complain.

Part 5

Five guys come to visit Ciaran in Killiecrankie, but Ciaran is at work, and Zuzanna and Sylvia are the only ones at home. They came to collect the debt Ciaran owes them.
Because they cannot bust Ciaran up, they decide to gang-rape both Sylvia and Zuzanna. It is the most brutal rape scene I have ever written.
When Sylvia and Zuzanna don’t pick up Ciaran from work, he gets really pissed and goes home by public transport. He finds both women abused and tied to the bed.
Sylvia and Zuzanna tell him they threatened to come back and give him the treatment they gave the women. Ciaran has no other choice but to confess that he has gambling debts and they are not small either. Especially with the ‘interest rates’ that were added.
All is lost for Ciaran. This is losing the bet and he cannot blame the women either. These guys did a number on them.
The next day, he is flabbergasted when Zuzanna decides to pay these thugs, using her own money. She and Sylvia went to them and made them clear they would press charges if they didn’t leave them alone after they were paid in full.
They never told his father. Ciaran’s world has turned around.

Part 6

The first meeting with Donald J. is new prime-sub Helga and his son, Sylvia and Zuzanna did not go as planned.
Zuzanna and Sylvia suggest an additional bet that if they can double the worth of the house in the next 1,5 years, Ciaran will get that house for free to do whatever he wants with it.
Not Donald J. but Helga negotiates the deal. Perhaps Ciaran didn’t notice, but Zuzanna and Sylvia sure did.
Not a word about rape or gambling debts.
They write a letter to Sandor inviting them to Killiecrankie for the Christmas holidays

Part 7 - Midpoint?

Jutta, Ilse and Sandor come to visit from 1 to 10 January.
Sandor corrects the behaviour of Ilse and Jutta, like the master he is. Ciaran looks up at him and says he wants this as well.
Zuzanna confesses to Ciaran she is in love with him
Sandor gives Ilse to Ciaran to play a scene and they learn him beginners essentials.
Surprising everyone, Ciaran decides he wants Zuzanna as his novice slave. Zuzanna agrees. Sylvia will supervise.
Sandor is appointed Head of their Household, bearing total responsibility – including finance – for their little threesome household.

Part 8

As these two novices do not know where to start, Sylvia takes the lead.
Sylvia converts the old Monopoly game into a Master Always Wins game.
They play their roleplay games every Saturday night.
At his father’s request, they have another meeting with him. What might have been the reason for the meeting is anyone’s guess.
Short transformational chapter, jump 4 months in time, describing what they do to the house to fix it up, how Ciaran gets serious about his school work, and how Zuzanna slowly gives in to her dominant lovers’ wishes.

Part 9

Ciaran celebration of his 17th birthday, and he can now drive a car under supervision. And he loves doing that.
Sylvia passed her fifth and last stage of grief, and her old submissive urges rise until boiling point.
A crisis call to Sandor result in him picking her up a week later. Zuzanna released Sylvia after more than a year of being chained to her.
Jutta will take the role of mistress again with Sylvia.
Suddenly, it’s just Ciaran and Zuzanna left to their own devices.
A panic call from his dad that one of his guardians left, without his permission, results in another weird meeting with Dad in London.

Part 10

From 17 December to 6 January 2030, Ciaran and Zuzanna will go ‘home’ to the Netherlands to celebrate the holidays over there.
Emotional reunion
Christmas with Sylvia’s family.
Reconciliation with Natascha and Peter
Opening of NEW Kinky Club Kinta, the barn has been reorganised as a club with the same name as the old one
Party opening by Sandor and Ilse
Scene with Donald J. and Helga. Roles are reversed, Donald is the submissive now. In front of his son and ex-wife:
Next scene with Martin and Victoria
Ciaran is challenged by his father to do a scene. He chooses Sylvia to do the scene.
IT IS A TOTAL SHOCK FOR ZUZANNA THAT HE DIDN’T CHOSE HER. AGAIN WHEN THERE IS A CHOICE, IT’S NEVER THE UGLY GIRL. In panic she flees away and takes the first ferry to Scotland to get her belongings and get out of Scotland.

Part 11

The road to Killiecrankie is long and dark. When she arrives “home” she finds Ciaran already there (thanks to the helicopter of his dad).
In a scene he explains to her why he chose for Sylvia (more experiences, less chance of failure for himself)
The scene takes three full days (chapter second day, third day) for them to reconcile.

Part 12 - Epilogue

Ciaran finds a girl his own age
Zuzanna stays with them
And they lived happily ever after