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9 June 20259 June 2025Uncategorized

Outline Ugly Girl

Photo by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash

Finished outline Ugly Girl in June 2025 The book is written in the first person, like Bad Girl and Good Girl. This […]

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20 May 202520 May 2025About Ugly Girl

How Zuzanna is changing

A story is about change, right? A story where everthing stays the same is not a story, rather a documentary. In Ugly Girl we see how Zuzanna slowly changes

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20 May 202520 May 2025About Ugly Girl

Separation between main character and protagonist

Explanation why I chose to separate the main character from the role of the protagonist in Ugly Girl.

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17 May 202518 May 2025Places

The Farmstead in the Netherlands

Description and a photo how the farmhouse in the Netherlands may have looked like. It plays a role in all three books of the Dutch Master Series

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14 May 202514 May 2025First Draft

Chapter 1, scene 2 Koen is taken to hospital

Dinner BDSM-style with Zuzanna present

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14 May 202514 May 2025First Draft

CHAPTER 1, Scene 1 Walk in the forest

Koen invites out of the blue Zuzanna for a walk in the forest. He tells her he is going to die soon, and that she is the first to know. He wants to ‘give’ Sylvia away to Zuzanna after he is gone, but Zuzanna thinks this is too crazy for words

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14 May 202514 May 2025About Ugly Girl

Cover pictures

Who is the intriguing lady on the cover of the Dutch Master Series? A proper attribution to the photographer.

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14 May 202514 May 2025Bad Girl

Mixed reactions on Bad Girl

Bad Girl received a luke warm welcome on the Stories online site. Compared to Good Girl, it didn’t do all that well. Yet feedback from editors was quite positive.

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14 May 2025Outline

Outline using Aeon Timeline

Example of outline Ugly Girl, the first scenes As an example of my way of outlining, I plot every little scene that […]

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12 May 202514 May 2025#1 Opening Image, Save The Cat

Quote Pauline Reáge

Quote from Good Girl “Keep me rather in this cage, and feed me sparingly, if you dare. Anything that brings me closer […]

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