The scenes are sometimes very short. The reason is that they are meant als scenes and not as chapters. I will combine later these scenes to chapters that have more or less the same length.
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This next chapter is a snippet from Helga’s diary. It’s in a different format and we will see several pages of her diary woven into this story. Helga is being traded in for Donald J.’s wife. A deal that gives Donald J. a very experienced maso slave, and makes Helga’s Husband (Martin) rich. All these diary snippets are written in second person to create distance (from her feelings) and to the reader as well.
This is as far as I’ve come